Could anyone check my polish? What can i improve?

Ok, now this is what i am trying to write:

Hello,

How are you doing?

I am bored therefore i am writing this email to practise my Polish.
My polish is not so good, but i am trying my best.
Tomorrow i am going to buy two new games for my xbox360. Time flies when having fun.

Bye.

This is what i wrote in Polish(no laughing!!) :)

Cześć,

Co słychać?

Jestem znudzony Więc Piszę e-mail do ćwiczję móje Polski.
Móje polski jest nie dobrze, ale spróbować moje najlepszem.
Jutro kupuję dwie nowego gra na xbox360. Csaz leci kiedy zabawne jest.

Cześć


What can i improve? Probably most of it ,but to get better one have to try :)

I can't, because I'm a beginner too. Just thought I'd say hello to a fellow novice. :)

But just for fun, and not that it's worth anything really, I'll say that your paragraph looks to me like it would make sense to someone reading it, even if it's not perfect. Your word order in sentence 2 is a bit different than I think my textbook would put it, and unless a future lesson will prove me wrong, I don't remember "moje" having a ó. But I'm sure a native speaker will set things straight soon, more authoritatively. :)

porta you did quite well,

Jestem znudzony, piszę więc email żeby ćwiczyć mój Polski.
Mój polski nie jest najlepszy, ale staram się jak mogę.
Jutro kupię dwie nowe gry do mojego xbox'a360. Czas leci w trakcie zabawy.

Thanks ,i see i have to work a bit more on it.
It's hard to find the right words as the dictionary has a lot of words with the same meaning.
Also ,the sentences is totaly backwards from what we write in Norwegian :)
But, I'm determined to get it right.

no no no ;)
its because you write the sentences backwards in norwegian to what it is in polish;)

Ahh, so thats why i cant seem to get it right? ^^

Hej, Porta!

Naa, snakker du ogsaa norsk? Jeg laeser norsk, men snakker, skriver, forstaar dansk aa svensk.

Hvorfaar laer du dig polsk? Kan du tysk?

Marek

Czesc, Porta!

Od ilu lat uczysz sie jezyka polskiego?
Marek

I understand all you said in Norwegian, Marek, i'm learning Swedish and Norwegian by myself ;) i'm happy to see that i can understand a little :p

Hejsan, Polson!

Jaha, eet nordiskt spraak till? Det ar en utmaning, tror jag. Hur lange har du lart dig norska och svenska?

Lar du dig ocksaa polska?
Marek

I understand more than i write (or talk) so i will answer in English if you don't mind ;)

I began to learn Swedish in February, but i don't know enough to be able to talk, but i can understand some words, and some sentences ;)
About Norwegian, actually i can't say i learn it, my Swedish skills and my English (and a bit of my German skills too) help me to understand Norwegian a little ;) I'm trying to learn more though. I'd love to go to Norway and Sweden someday !

And you ? Why do you learn these languages ?

I'm learning Polish too (i love languages ;) i've even created few languages as a hobby (as Tolkien did :p ), but i don't speak Polish very well, but as Norwegian and Swedish, i can undersand it, and even understand people speaking it ;)

Heisann ,jeg lærer meg polsk fordi jeg liker kulturen ,og vurderer å skaffe meg ei leilighet der nede. Var også noe greier med ei jente i begynnelsen. ;)
Forstår tysk ,men kan ikke skrive det.
Norsk, dansk og svensk er ikke så veldig forskjellig :)

Od 4 miesiąc :)

Good ! You learnt a lot :p it's a difficult language ;)

No kidding! It's totaly different from Norwegian as you know. but i'm sticking with it, I love challenges :)

LoL yeah ;) but i found some similarities between Polish and Norwegian :p about vocabularies, coming from German i must say, for example pig in Norwegian is "svin" (i don't remember actually :p), in Polish it's "swinia" (and in German, it's "schwein") ;) LoL

Oh ,there is lots of word that are almost similar between Polish and Norwegian :)
Also between German and Norwegain.

;) can you give me more examples of similarities between Polish and Norwegian ?

Agurk - Ogórek - Cucumber
Sitron - Cytryna - Lemon
Frisør - fryzjer - Hairdresser
Apotek - Apteka - Pharmacy
Sukker - Cukier - Sugar

To name a few ,there is a lot of these words :)

Cytryna, Citron in French, Zitrone in German...
Fryzjer, Friseur in German, i think it comes from French...
Apteka, Apotheke in German, and Apothicaire in old French ;)
Cukier, Zucker, Sucre, Sugar, Zucchero, etc.

Beautiful Europe... ;) LoL

Polson,
I learned those languages because it's practical to know related languages, plus, contrary to popular belief, Scandinavians as a rule have a bit too much of the "look Ma, no hands!"-approach to English. They often, though not always, assume, "Hey, it looks easy, we hear enough (frequently low-level US-speakers in contemporary music and movies!!) English everyday, ergo, we can speak English perfectly!"

Far from the case, as I'm sure Porta can readily attest! I've no problem with e.g. Norwegians saying they like chatting in English with foreigners in order to improve or practice their own English skills. All too often though, they arrogantly feel they can speak English better than foreigners could speak Norwegian (hence resisting needed correction). Europeans are sometimes lazy about English particularly, since, unlike Americans, English is considered soooo important, it's often not cultivated. Americans usually have to search far and wide for someone to practice a foreign language with, making the US-language major more serious about improving their foreign-language knowledge.

Marek

There is a lot of truth in what you say Marek. :)

Hvis du vil kan jeg snakke Norsk til deg.

Hejsa
It's nice to see that there is so many people on this forum speaking skandinavian languages. I used to learn danish (norvegian is so similar :)) but forgot many things coz i don't use it... Maybe you know any forum similar to this for people learning scandinavian languages?


You should say: cztery (4) miesiące
or
Od czterech (4) miesięcy
Men hvis det er kun 4 maaneder du er meget meget godt til polsk! (hope this sentence makes sense) :)

Makes perfect sense :)
Takker for hjelpen bamse.

Yeah, there are people here speaking or learning Scandinavian languages...
Scandinavian countries and Poland have almost always been "friends" ;p except for the "Great Northern Wars"...Even in the Viking era, Poles and Vikings used to work together, some (Poles) may have been among the Vikings when they discoverd Vinland (America) in 1000 ! :p LoL

Velbekomme porta :)
Polson- you mean Jan z Kolna paradox? ;)

:| what ? ;)

haha, u guys are talking some sh*it

cant understand anything

even those statements which are in polish oO

oh wyspi is back and she's ragging!
run!

haha, im not so bad :)

yeah nice u noticed i wasnt oline some days
had a lot of work and then some love sensations :D

so good to be back ^^