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Sending this poem to a girl - cheezy or not?

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portaThreads: 24 Posts: 354 Joined: Jul 16, 07	Jul 17, 07, 19:44 / #
I was going to send a small poem to a girl i like , but would this be just cheezy or sweet? One says it takes one minute to meet a special human, one hour to appreciate it, one day to love it, but a lifetime to forget it.

ArturSzastakThreads: 6 Posts: 828 Joined: Feb 16, 07	Jul 17, 07, 19:52 / #
Quoting: porta I was going to send a small poem to a girl i like , but would this be just cheezy or sweet? With a box o' chocolatey goodies and maybe two dozen roses.......sweet for sure :]

Shawn_H	Edited by: Shawn_H Jul 17, 07, 19:52 / #
Quoting: porta human Quoting: porta it Doesn't ring as personal to me.. depends on the desired effect, and the context.. Better ask a girl/woman/lady though - I'm just a stoopid, stoopid man :-) the rest seems ok though

ArturSzastakThreads: 6 Posts: 828 Joined: Feb 16, 07	Jul 17, 07, 19:54 / #
Quoting: Shawn_H I'm just a stoopid, stoopid man :-) You're a dude????? <<<<gasp>>>> (imagine one of the good old "spy" smilies here)

Shawn_H	Jul 17, 07, 19:55 / #
Sorry to wreck your fantasies Art...

ArturSzastakThreads: 6 Posts: 828 Joined: Feb 16, 07	Jul 17, 07, 19:56 / #
Quoting: Shawn_H Sorry to wreck your fantasies Art... It's OK, I'll live :]

portaThreads: 24 Posts: 354 Joined: Jul 16, 07	Jul 17, 07, 20:00 / #
My intention is not to sound to serious yet ,but also hint to her that i think she is someone special :) Therefore i have human and it. I could change it with Lady and her.

shewolfThreads: 5 Posts: 1,833 Joined: Dec 23, 06	Jul 17, 07, 20:02 / #
It's not that the poem is "cheezy". It might be a little overwhelming for someone who isn't in a commited relationship with you. She might think you're pressuring her to feel something too serious. She might even see you as a potential stalker who won't be able to forget her if she doesn't want to see you anymore. That's just my opinion. My suggestion is to give her something less serious if you're trying to make her like you.

ArturSzastakThreads: 6 Posts: 828 Joined: Feb 16, 07	Jul 17, 07, 20:02 / #
Quoting: porta My intention is not to sound to serious yet ,but also hint to her that i think she is someone special OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.....................why didn't you just say so. Yeah I can't help you with that, sorry :]

ArturSzastakThreads: 6 Posts: 828 Joined: Feb 16, 07	Jul 17, 07, 20:03 / #
Quoting: shewolf My suggestion is to give her something less serious if you're trying to make her like you. Yeah.....like an old gym sock or maybe some fresh road-kill. :]

shopgirlThreads: 7 Posts: 1,446 Joined: Apr 6, 07	Edited by: shopgirl Jul 17, 07, 20:04 / #
There was another thing in here in the translation forum...."short verse for a card" I think that is very nice...let me see if I can find it for you.....its not a poem but I like it! URL

shewolfThreads: 5 Posts: 1,833 Joined: Dec 23, 06	Jul 17, 07, 20:06 / #
Quoting: ArturSzastak Yeah.....like an old gym sock or maybe some fresh road-kill. :] Is that why the women can't get enough of you, Artur?

ArturSzastakThreads: 6 Posts: 828 Joined: Feb 16, 07	Jul 17, 07, 20:06 / #
Well here's a poem that isn't serious but can give her a hint of your intentions. Roses are red, lemons are sour, spread your legs, and give me an hour. :]

shopgirlThreads: 7 Posts: 1,446 Joined: Apr 6, 07	Jul 17, 07, 20:07 / #
Quoting: ArturSzastak maybe some fresh road-kill. :] Kitties do bring their owners dead birds and mice to show love.....happens all the time! :) Nice kitty! :)

Shawn_H	Jul 17, 07, 20:07 / #
Quoting: ArturSzastak Roses are red, lemons are sour bustingagut!!!

ArturSzastakThreads: 6 Posts: 828 Joined: Feb 16, 07	Jul 17, 07, 20:07 / #
Quoting: shewolf Is that why the women can't get enough of you, Artur? Who doesn't want a cat with a melon for a hat??? ( Not only can I write poems, but I can rhyme:] )

shopgirlThreads: 7 Posts: 1,446 Joined: Apr 6, 07	Jul 17, 07, 20:08 / #
Quoting: ArturSzastak Well here's a poem that isn't serious but can give her a hint of your intentions. Porta....wait until you know her better before following Artur's romantic tips! :D

shewolfThreads: 5 Posts: 1,833 Joined: Dec 23, 06	Jul 17, 07, 20:08 / #
Quoting: shopgirl Kitties do bring their owners dead birds and mice to show love.....happens all the time! :) Is that why my cat did that? Wow.

ArturSzastakThreads: 6 Posts: 828 Joined: Feb 16, 07	Jul 17, 07, 20:11 / #
Quoting: shewolf Is that why my cat did that? Wow No. He was showing you what he wishes he was big enough to do to you :]

shewolfThreads: 5 Posts: 1,833 Joined: Dec 23, 06	Jul 17, 07, 20:13 / #
Quoting: ArturSzastak No. He was showing you what he wishes he was big enough to do to you :] I thought he was just trying to prove how tough he was.

ArturSzastakThreads: 6 Posts: 828 Joined: Feb 16, 07	Jul 17, 07, 20:14 / #
Quoting: shewolf I thought he was just trying to prove how tough he was Yeah I dunno......my dog is a friggin mole serial killer though :]

portaThreads: 24 Posts: 354 Joined: Jul 16, 07	Jul 17, 07, 20:17 / #
Quoting: shopgirl There was another thing in here in the translation forum...."short verse for a card" I think that is very nice...let me see if I can find it for you.....its not a poem but I like it! URL Thanks for the link shopgirl. ;) I will try it out and see what she thinks :) I will hide my poem for some other time.

PunchBuggyBlue	Edited by: PunchBuggyBlue Jul 17, 07, 20:55 / #
I know you're not my hunnny, So I thought about it twice, But it's just dinner and movie, Do you think that would be nice? Try that, a little more appropriate for someone you just met. Make sure the card is nice though.

Lady in red	Jul 18, 07, 03:05 / #
Quoting: porta I was going to send a small poem to a girl i like , but would this be just cheezy or sweet?One says it takes one minute to meet a special human,one hour to appreciate it,one day to love it,but a lifetime to forget it. I wouldn't :( not until you know her really well.......just ask her out for a coffee.....:)

JamboThreads: 2 Posts: 157 Joined: Jun 11, 07	Jul 18, 07, 03:30 / #
If you have not gone out with her at all or only for a short time I think it is way over the top and she will run a mile. Lady in red's advice seems most sensible.

Wyspianska	Jul 18, 07, 03:35 / #
Sry, i dont wanna be cruel but that poem is ... ughh. Dont send her it even after longer time of relationship! Never! It will kill everything, trust me ^^ U should take it easy. Tell her better some SMALL compliment or so ;) Step by step.

Wyspianska	Jul 18, 07, 03:36 / #
Quoting: ArturSzastak spread your legs, and give me an hour. LOL shocked

zhenzhenThreads: 4 Posts: 38 Joined: Jul 17, 07	Jul 18, 07, 05:34 / #
I think girls like poem,but sweet and good poem.

Wyspianska	Jul 18, 07, 05:44 / #
Quoting: zhenzhen I think girls like poem,but sweet and good poem. And i think that PEOPLE like poems, but good poems ;) sweet eee? no:D

Lady in red	Jul 18, 07, 05:47 / #
It's definitely cheesy and only send it to someone you never want to see again. Poems are when you are infatuated or in love. Never b4 or after <grin>

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