Statement of purpose in English help translating to Polish

hadi:

Getting PhD is not a goal, rather an opportunity. I strongly believe this statement. And this very first sentence can also define my points of view for choosing the Krakow Academy of Music to study in.
I've lived whole of my life here, in Iran; a place I've grown up, loved classical music and, at a point, embarked on learning and pursuing it up to the highest possible.

hadiThreads: 2 Posts: 9 Joined: Aug 2, 09	Aug 24, 09, 10:10 / #
Dear members hi! can some one please help me translating this SoP to Polish? I need it for a university in Poland ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Getting PhD is not a goal, rather an opportunity. I strongly believe this statement. And this very first sentence can also define my points of view for choosing the Krakow Academy of Music to study in. I've lived whole of my life here, in Iran; a place I've grown up, loved classical music and, at a point, embarked on learning and pursuing it up to the highest possible. Getting BSc.(Eng) in Mechanical Engineering and BA in Music as dual degree, MMus in composition from Art University of --- [the only university which offers graduate program in music in my country] and teaching music somewhere includes where I've graduated from, did not affect or retaliate my enthusiasm to learn more! As a general fact, the classical music belongs to Europe and one can't live far from and learn what's going on it. So, although I've graduated in highest possible degree offers in composition in Iran and unsurprisingly have a good job regarding my current education, I've decided to come to Europe for further studies. I've searched through many universities in the world offers higher educations in composition with two main criteria in mind; First, the performance opportunities and other encouragements for composers and Second, the overall studying conditions especially for international students. Since I believe, condition is the general key to creation. The reason for choosing Poland as a homeland for further studies isn't a single one. As two great ancient empires and civilizations, both Iran and Poland have many common cultural and influential analogousness, I'll feel home in such a society. Also in Poland; as some sort of beating cultural heart of the entire Europe, there are possibilities to meet and contact with so many influential people who live or travel to Poland; including many artists, thinkers and musicians. There are also some great orchestras and other music related communities. I've enjoyed a lot, when I went to Ukraine for premiering my first concerto; Concerto for piano and orchestra- played by --- and conducted by ---. Different cultural experiences bring to us different points of view. As a teacher and lecturer, I know the importance of working with great and renowned professors and instructors, who love their profession. I've contacted Mr. ---; head of composition department of the Krakow academy of Music and have inquired him about some of my compositions. His responds not only encouraged me a lot, but also made me more interest in the conservatoire than before. My goals are to achieve more knowledge than before. As I like to write huge orchestral piece that require constant contacts with performers and conductors, this is also essential to learn from professors that have written such works before. One of my recent works that is the grand prize winner of 24th International --- Music Festival, couldn't premier in Iran yet due to lack of professionals (conductors, performers and ensembles) to premier such kind of works. I also have some great experiences in music business that I hope to expand them in Poland as well; Experience in engraving and music calligraphy, preparing (music) books for printing, compositions for games and theater and of course teaching music professionally. Thanks for considerations ---------------------------------------------------------------------- P.S: I've used --- for some personal information not directly important in the translation e.g. names

Pawelek1Threads: 1 Posts: 35 Joined: Jul 11, 09	Aug 24, 09, 13:10 / #
Wow that's a lot to translate there...

MichalThreads: - Posts: 2,408 Joined: Feb 27, 07	Aug 24, 09, 16:25 / #
hadi: not affect or retaliate my enthusiasm You can also see that whoever wrote this does not know English very well.

michaltk	Aug 24, 09, 16:32 / #
I've lived whole of my life here, in Iran; You can also see that whoever wrote this does not know English very well. duh?? anyways, too much to translate… you should’ve posted this in small pieces instead…

kali92ukThreads: - Posts: 4 Joined: Aug 22, 09	Edited by: kali92uk Aug 25, 09, 02:31 / #
a lot of mistakes, thats how it looks like when some polish guy tries to write something...special - with dictionary all the way through n too much to translate, nobody is so helpful here :P

niejestemcapitaThreads: 3 Posts: 666 Joined: Jan 3, 09	Aug 25, 09, 02:34 / #
Michal: You can also see that whoever wrote this does not know English very well. Quite well enough it seems...

asikThreads: 2 Posts: 547 Joined: Feb 17, 09	Aug 25, 09, 03:56 / #
kali92uk: a lot of mistakes, thats how it looks like when some polish guy tries to write something...special If you know English so well why don't you "see" that the author/poster is from IRAN not "some polish guy"!

NPosuniakThreads: 11 Posts: 122 Joined: Jun 25, 09	Aug 25, 09, 04:17 / #
kali92uk: a lot of mistakes, thats how it looks like when some polish guy tries to write something...special - with dictionary all the way through n too much to translate, nobody is so helpful here :P Can someone translate this to english for us too? hadi: hadi www.translatica.pl enjoy.

asikThreads: 2 Posts: 547 Joined: Feb 17, 09	Aug 25, 09, 05:14 / #
hadi: Getting PhD is not a goal, rather an opportunity. I strongly believe this statement. And this very first sentence can also define my points of view for choosing the Krakow Academy of Music to study in. I've lived whole of my life here, in Iran; a place I've grown up, loved classical music and, at a point, embarked on learning and pursuing it up to the highest possible. Zrobić doktorat nie jest celem, to skorzystanie z istniejącej możliwości. Głęboko wierzę w to stwierdzenie. To pierwsze zdanie precyzyjnie określa mój punkt widzenia i dlatego też wybrałem Akademię Muzyczną w Krakowie za miejsce nauki. Całe moje życie mieszkałem tu, w Iranie. Tu dorastałem, tu pokochałem muzykę klasyczną i tu w pewnym momencie życia postanowiłem kształcić się w tym właśnie kierunku i starać sie dojść do poziomu najwyżej osiągalnego w tej dziedzinie.

asikThreads: 2 Posts: 547 Joined: Feb 17, 09	Aug 25, 09, 05:57 / #
hadi: Getting BSc.(Eng) in Mechanical Engineering and BA in Music as dual degree, MMus in composition from Art University of --- [the only university which offers graduate program in music in my country] and teaching music somewhere includes where I've graduated from, did not affect or retaliate my enthusiasm to learn more! Dotychczasowo ukończyłem studia zdobywając Licencjat z Inżynierii Mechanicznej oraz podwójny Licencjat Muzyczny tj. Licencjat z Komponowania Muzyki oraz Licencjat z Nauczania Muzyki z Uniwersytetu .....(put original Uni name here), który jest jedynym Uniwersytetem w moim kraju, co oferuje takie kierunki muzyczne. Ukończone studia zapoczątkowały mój zapał, aby kształcić sie w tym kierunku jeszcze wyżej.

hadiThreads: 2 Posts: 9 Joined: Aug 2, 09	Aug 26, 09, 06:07 / #
thanks dear asik, for helping. still waiting for the rest if you can