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Poems for Poland.

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Lodz_The_BoatThreads: 58 Posts: 2,314 Joined: Sep 7, 08	Edited by: Lodz_The_Boat Oct 1, 08, 04:16 / #
When I see you, O Poland... I see you stand strong... I see you firm.. A sign of righteous against all wrong.... When I feel you, O Poland... I feel your tender touch... I feel the protection... I feel the love so much... When I hear you, O Poland... I hear the winds speak... I hear the breeze whishper... I hear the flowing river's songs... I hear them say O Poland... YOU ARE THE RIGHTEOUS OVER ALL WRONGS! The Land of its people...the land of peace... The Land of Spring, Summer & Winters mild or peak... The Land of hope, and the land of love... The Land of trees, forests, fields and the settling dove... When your leaves touch my forehead... I feel my mother's care... When your tree gives me shelter... I feel being in my father's sphere... I tell you, O Poland... You will remain eternal... A land of the kind, a land which washes away despair... You are the land of the farmer...a hand which feeds.. You are mine O Poland... you are for them who have love in their speak! By: Lodz_The_Boat :)

PolsonThreads: 15 Posts: 2,812 Joined: May 9, 07	Oct 1, 08, 04:51 / #
Terre de liberté, Terre qui a saigné, Terre qui s'est battue, Terre qui a vaincu. Au milieu de tant d'ennemis, Ton peuple a souffert, Mais de braves hommes ont péri, Pour te rendre fière. Ton drapeau porte la couleur du sang, Symbole d'un pays en guerre, Mais aussi le blanc, Telle la neige des rudes hivers. Si aujourd'hui ton peuple vit libre et fier, La mémoire des ancêtres reste entière, Ô Pologne, pays de mes frères. Ô Pologne, pays de ma chair. Polson. A little shorter than yours, LTB, it took me 10 minutes to write it ;)

MatyjaszThreads: 2 Posts: 1,786 Joined: Jul 20, 06	Oct 1, 08, 05:18 / #
It's too pompus for my taste, but respect for writing in your secong language.

Lodz_The_BoatThreads: 58 Posts: 2,314 Joined: Sep 7, 08	Oct 1, 08, 05:50 / #
where are the creative minds...where are the patriotic and poetic hearts~!!!

WroclawThreads: 77 Posts: 7,404 Joined: Apr 1, 06 [Moderator]	Oct 1, 08, 10:05 / #
A Dubious Poem. The lakes in summer People sailing The lakes in winter Frozen over The cities and towns Growing fast The cities and towns Beautiful squares The mountains to the east Tall and mighty The mountains to the west Gentle and calm The Baltic Sea For fun The Baltic Sea For amber The history of Poland Strength and hope The history of Poland Relates my past Farms and villages Too few cows Farms and villages In need of help

HuegThreads: 1 Posts: 428 Joined: Apr 16, 07	Oct 1, 08, 10:24 / #
Tracing the path of a New dawn Hopeful eyes watch shielded by dirt covered fingers Change tempts that fickle breeze Chills to the bone Fair winds.

szarlotkaThreads: 14 Posts: 3,349 Joined: Feb 20, 07	Oct 1, 08, 11:39 / #
Wroclaw: A Dubious Poem. From the Master Dubious Poet... a most welcome return

Lodz_The_BoatThreads: 58 Posts: 2,314 Joined: Sep 7, 08	Edited by: Lodz_The_Boat Oct 3, 08, 09:19 / #
The Might of Ages The right of Sages The Pride of the Devine Hand.... Its My Poland... its my Poland... its my Blessed Land...its my Poland!... The Sword of Power The Power of Truth The Eyes of Kindness The Language of the Youth! The Words of Change... The tide of Love The Nation of Nations... Blessed from up above.... Its the land of beauty...the land of hope... Its my blessed land...blessed are every sand.... Its my Poland... its my Poland...its my Poland.......its, my ~Poland~.... By: Lodz_The_Boat (I have developed such a strong tune to it... if only i could add that)

Lodz_The_BoatThreads: 58 Posts: 2,314 Joined: Sep 7, 08	Oct 3, 08, 11:12 / #
A nation of torches A nation of rivers A vision of wisdom A flow of love's believers... A nation of today... A nation of the farmer... A nation that welcomes... A nation whose greets are warmer... A nation which is yourse... If you are for its love... A nation, O my Poland, exalted by up above! By: Lodz_The_Boat (I hope you like it...didnt develop a tune yet).

Lodz_The_BoatThreads: 58 Posts: 2,314 Joined: Sep 7, 08	Oct 3, 08, 13:08 / #
Could the administrator write a poem. So wonderful it could be :) ... Less poets in here... :P ... Anyone else with a patriotic poet inside?

HuegThreads: 1 Posts: 428 Joined: Apr 16, 07	Oct 3, 08, 14:06 / #
administrator A jauntey little number :) Admin is my name And PF is my nation The US is my dwelling place The stars are my destination :)

miranda	Oct 3, 08, 17:19 / #
Hueg: Admin is my name and PF is my GAME, Hueg: The US is my dwelling place Hueg: The stars are my destination

HuegThreads: 1 Posts: 428 Joined: Apr 16, 07	Oct 3, 08, 19:56 / #
Not bad M but using game instead of nation means that the second line loses its Foyle like Gulliver without his mini golf. :)

Lodz_The_BoatThreads: 58 Posts: 2,314 Joined: Sep 7, 08	Oct 4, 08, 09:10 / #
Admin... you will not add anything? :( What about more poets... I will add here soon again :)

HuegThreads: 1 Posts: 428 Joined: Apr 16, 07	Edited by: Hueg Oct 5, 08, 13:19 / #
didnt develop a tune yet All words have their own tune mate you just have to let the music sing to you. Don't believe it? Try saying the first lines of your poem like a Dalek. :) A nation of torches A nation of rivers Now say it again but in your own voice. See how when you say it normally it finds its own melody? And if I may take your words and develop them. Indulge my presumptiveness mate it's just an exercise. :) Beacons burning brightly Shimmer on cascading beauty Sparkle on wise eyes Those that love Poland. edit: forgot my smilies

Lodz_The_BoatThreads: 58 Posts: 2,314 Joined: Sep 7, 08	Oct 6, 08, 11:51 / #
Under the wide sky, a bed of roses Thats you, O Poland Over the bed of roses, a patch of clouds Thats you, O Poland... Your face is ... my hearts desire, Your truth takes ... my dreams go higher ... Your tender smile, which I see scattered throughout... Through trees, through branches, through leaves and in the sprout... Lights dance through them, creating the rhythm every way... O Poland... That how you begin a wonderful day.. O Poland... thats how.... you begin.... all..........your day. By: Lodz_The_Boat

JovaThreads: - Posts: 197 Joined: Mar 15, 08	Oct 6, 08, 11:56 / #
"Englishmen, you're all so fuc*ing pompous, and none of you have got any balls. " I know the majority of you are not English here but this quote sprang up in my mind the minute I read your poems :) hahaha I'm not trying to accuse you of having no balls though... But you are extremely pompous indeed :D

SeanusThreads: 22 Posts: 30,158 Joined: Dec 25, 07	Oct 6, 08, 11:57 / #
That's what we call a crude poem, LOL. No mention of Scotsmen there. We have balls, trust me ;)

Lodz_The_BoatThreads: 58 Posts: 2,314 Joined: Sep 7, 08	Edited by: Lodz_The_Boat Oct 6, 08, 11:59 / #
Seanus: Jova But I am a Pole :D... I wish to make my English better than the Englishmen (I actually feel like their english is poor). Are my poems that bad :( ? But these are not only poems...but they have tunes too....which i play on my guitar....so these are songs aswell.

SeanusThreads: 22 Posts: 30,158 Joined: Dec 25, 07	Oct 6, 08, 12:01 / #
It's not that hard really

JovaThreads: - Posts: 197 Joined: Mar 15, 08	Oct 6, 08, 12:02 / #
Lodz_The_Boat: Are my poems that bad :( ? I've never been an expert on poetry. I've never liked poetry, actually... Dunno if your poems are bad, they're just pompous to the limit ;)

Robert AThreads: 2 Posts: 228 Joined: Jul 29, 08	Oct 6, 08, 12:05 / #
Lodz_The_Boat: I wish to make my English better than the Englishmen (I actually feel like their english is poor). Indeed, your observation is accurate. . . sadly. Lodz_The_Boat: But these are not only poems...but they have tunes too....which i play on my guitar....so these are songs aswell. Rock on Tommy !!!! :)

szarlotkaThreads: 14 Posts: 3,349 Joined: Feb 20, 07	Oct 6, 08, 12:06 / #
Jova: I've never liked poetry, actually... Yet poetry is the window on the soul Without such verse you cannot be whole So before your next cup of coffee is over Make sure you read some Keats dear Jova

JovaThreads: - Posts: 197 Joined: Mar 15, 08	Oct 6, 08, 12:11 / #
szarlotka: Make sure you read some Keats dear Jova I have just graduated from so called "filologia angielska", thus, solely for that reason, you can be more than sure I have read loads of Keats, Pope, Gray, Wordsworth et al. However, I've not been converted to a poetry lover... Seems I'm insolently stubborn.

szarlotkaThreads: 14 Posts: 3,349 Joined: Feb 20, 07	Oct 6, 08, 12:13 / #
Jova: Seems I'm insolently stubborn. Fair enough. So I take it my poetry won't win you over then <grin>

JovaThreads: - Posts: 197 Joined: Mar 15, 08	Oct 6, 08, 12:18 / #
szarlotka: So I take it my poetry won't win you over then Well... Who knows? Keep on trying :))

HuegThreads: 1 Posts: 428 Joined: Apr 16, 07	Oct 6, 08, 17:05 / #
insolently stubborn And yet it seems to have filled your writing to the core with ripeness in that sweet kernel of a line. :)

miranda	Oct 6, 08, 17:07 / #
Hueg: Not bad M but using game instead of nation means that the second line loses its Foyle like Gulliver without his mini golf. :) who said I am a good poet? I take pictures instead.

HuegThreads: 1 Posts: 428 Joined: Apr 16, 07	Oct 6, 08, 17:08 / #
not converted to a poetry lover lol We've all been there yep. 'You can stand by the cyder press with your patient looks all you want I still don't like it. <courage summoning pause> It's nonsense.' Folded arms bracing to reap the whirlwind. 'Mum and Dad have been Larkin around' he'd say coldly. My old Professor used to like to blame the parents for our lack of love for the classics. It was pointless to argue of course. 'I'm not f**ked up' didn't sway him nor did 'It doesn't make any sense.' Piercing cobalt eyes pitied you as his distant voice oozed 'They don't mean to of course but they do. That and X Boxes of course. Extra just for you.'

JustysiaSThreads: 15 Posts: 2,869 Joined: Oct 14, 07 MEMBER	Oct 6, 08, 17:09 / #
Ode to Pantoflarz hej pantoflarze juz ja wam pokaze pf to nie raj dla chlopow bez jaj tak wiem, nie masz jaj daj zyc ludziom, daj juz nie mecz i nie klnij na ziemi ukleknij i przepros w pokorze jak dziac to sie moze ze gnebisz tak ludzi probujesz sie ludzic ze masz tu przewage ze zwracasz uwage i ze masz gadane nie ludz sie kochany jak bedziesz sie rzucac, no to niestety dostaniesz wpierdol od swojej kobiety

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