A general description of a Polish student (assignment)

dianaperazzoThreads: 4 Posts: 7 Joined: Sep 13, 09	Sep 26, 09, 23:27 / #
As an assignment I need to give a general description of a polish student. Did I get it right, if not what would you change? Thank you in advance. Karolina is 5’6” 22 years old single college student with no kids. She was born and grew up in Nieborow, a village 80 km from Warsaw. She was baptized as a Roman Catholic shortly after her birth. Both of her parents were school teachers and cared a lot about her and her brother’s education. Even from the youngest age she was told about the importance of education. No surprise that after finishing high school, she moved to Warsaw and started studying in the University of Warsaw. She lives in the dorms and does not have a full-time job. Her parent help her financially with the necessities. Right now she is a year away from getting her degree in economics. Growing up in the country, Karolina got used to eating healthy, mostly locally grown products. Because her parents took care of their own little garden, she enjoyed eating fresh berries and vegetables. She learned what is good and bad for her health from both her parents and community. Even after moving to Warsaw, Karolina did not stop caring about healthy eating. The fact that she visits her parents or they frequently come to visit her and stock her fridge with products helps her maintain her healthy food habits. Karolina is very concerned with her appearance. Even for the trip to the store she will dress neatly, put a little make-up on and make her hear look good. When in college, she normally wears comfortable clothes and shoes, such as jeans, t-shirt and tennis shoes. When going out, she will put on a dress and high-hill shoes. Karolina also visits aerobics classes twice a week in order to stay fit.

SeanusThreads: 22 Posts: 30,158 Joined: Dec 25, 07	Edited by: Seanus Sep 26, 09, 23:36 / #
1st line - Karolina is a 5.6", 80kms 4th line - her parents, at the University of Warsaw 5th line - Right now, she... Economics Third para, line 1 - make her hair line 3, high-heeled shoes, goes to aerobics classes I hope these corrections are understood and help you :)

dianaperazzoThreads: 4 Posts: 7 Joined: Sep 13, 09	Sep 27, 09, 01:07 / #
Thank you :) I am from Russia myslef, so I have some gramma problems.

SeanusThreads: 22 Posts: 30,158 Joined: Dec 25, 07	Sep 27, 09, 14:58 / #
Aha, from Russia. I'd love to hear you speak. Russian is so musical/melodic. Your grammar problems are very small. It was a very well-written piece so well done :)