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Pan Zuk GnojowyThreads: 7
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Edited by: Moderator  Oct 2, 11, 11:28    #1
Hej All,

I'm living out in Koszalin, and as I'm sure you'll know if you have visited the city, it's a very poetic place and its beauty has so inspired me that I took up a novel approach to practising my Polish:
Bad poems.
I though you might like to check them out and harangue me for my appalling (or revolutionary!) grammar.
smacznego!

DO NIEBA


biegniemy
do góry nogami
aby jeść salami
bo jesteśmy wspaniali

w piżamach
uciekamy...

będziemy pamiętać
panoramy
na szalonych drogach do..


na parapecie

czy jest gołąb
na parapecie?
czeka-zaczeka-doczeka się

ku ku ku wru,
gru gru gru gruuuu
daru daru daru daru?


jak to powiedzieć
po gołębiemu?
"coo coo coo caroooo"


cicho cicho cicho tam

 ogłądam wróble w mgłe

cicho dziobały
żabi cicho skok
na cicha soseneczka
oj!
 Ciebię obok 


:)

Zman  Oct 2, 11, 11:31    #2
I find them amuzing, pleasantly.... carry on!!!
Pan Zuk GnojowyThreads: 7
Posts: 27
Joined: Oct 26, 09
 Oct 2, 11, 11:34    #3
how's the last one? it's fresh material :)

the first line of the first poem was originally "s~~~~dalamy" but the authorities told me not to make trouble for myself and I backed down.
Pan Zuk GnojowyThreads: 7
Posts: 27
Joined: Oct 26, 09
 Oct 2, 11, 15:17    #4
can I add:

teraz mgła zniknie
tak nie mam nic
aby ogłądać

where's my violin..
Pan Zuk GnojowyThreads: 7
Posts: 27
Joined: Oct 26, 09
 Dec 10, 11, 21:44    #5
more from the bard
please correct with severity, but allow for nonsense and poetic license ;))

PALCE U NOGI

twój śmiech;
jak kropelki
spadające na
ksylofonie

muzyka
dla moich uszu
.. ..palce
..itd

M A M   P Y T A N K O

rekin krąży wokół makowiecu?
nie
chomika krąży słońce?
..być może
muchomorek śpiewa stokrotce
Małe pytanko:
Nie się kochają ćmy i żarówka ?



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