I'll add some punctuation to this and changed it into more grammatical speech.
mmm ciekawe jaki kolor maja te oczy czyzby niebieskie hmmm niewazne bo jakos Twoje oczy potrafia przyciagnac pozdrawiam i przesylam buziaki czekam z niecierpliwoscia na wrzesien hmmm fajny z Ciebie chlopak Twoja dziewczyna będzie naprawde szczesliwa hehehehe tylko musisz ja odnalesc jeny beznadziejny komentaz ale co tam ; ) do uslyszenia pa
I wonder what your eyes' colour is. Is it blue? Never mind, 'cause your eyes can somehow attract. I'm sending my greetings and kisses, I'm looking forward to/waiting impatiently for September. You're a cool guy. Your girlfriend will be really happy (laugh) but you only have to find her. Oh, my, what a hopeless comment but whatever. 'Till the next hearing, bye.
nowe fotki są zdecydowanie lepsze czrno białe też są dobre jeżeli patrzeć z perspektywy sztuki ale co za dozo to nie zdrowo w kolorach wygladasz zywiej pewniej na tej fotce widzę ze popadlas w marzenia zielone tło ma romantyczny klimat wspomnień dla mnie bomba.....
The new photos are much better. The B&W ones are good,too, looking at from the artistic point of view, but everything in moderation. In colours you look more lively, self-assured. On this photo, I can see you fell into daydreams (I really don't know how to translate this, it sound so ridiculous). The green background has a romantic atmosphere of recollection. For me it's great.
z kwiatami jest Ci do twarzy nie chowaj sie tak bo tak Cie znajdę)))).....
You look good with flowers. Don't hide, I'll find you anyway.
Now, my translation was a bit 'improved'. In Polish, he sounds like a 13-year-old boy, it's not even proper Polish. She writes like that too. I think his bad style is enough to dump him.