It`s almost perfect though it should be "Tęskniłam" instead of "Tęskniłem", cose you`re a woman.
In Polish all verbs (as well as adjectives - but this isn`t important here) have a female and a male form - women are using the female form, while men are using the male form - this way we know i.e. if a text had been written/spoken by a woman or a man.
I have no idea how to write it phonetic in a proffesional way.. ..but let me figureout something..
Here you`ve got a Polish online voice synthesator
http://www.ivo.pl/?page=syntezator_mowy_ivona
Just write the text in the white field - press "Odczytaj" - and here you go.